We, MBA website project staff, have just launched our global MBA site of Doshisha Business
School today. Thank you so much for your co-operation.
http://gmba.doshisha.ac.jp/index.html
As I informed it by using this weblog before, we have been created this site since September this year. After it takes about two month and more, the first launch has been released today. I was wondering if several mistakes could be hiding somewhere even though we checked many time by several people. Please let us know if you find some of them. Anyway have a look and feedback any comments about this site to create it better.
As a student learning the English language myself, I would probably put it some other way as follows:
- ...... we have been CREATING this site since September this year.
(Note: Using passive voice (i.e. been created) makes no sense here.)
- After it takes about two MONTHS and more,......
- ...... even though we checked many TIMES AND by several people.
- Anyway, have a look and PLEASE KINDLY SHOW US YOUR COMMENT ON this site SO WE CAN MAKE it better.
Well, that is just the first paragraph ...... and I hope you dont get angry with me!
Posted by: Bing Lui | November 17, 2008 at 10:36 PM