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November 07, 2008


Bing Lui

As a student learning the English language myself, I would probably put it some other way as follows:

- ...... we have been CREATING this site since September this year.
(Note: Using passive voice (i.e. been created) makes no sense here.)

- After it takes about two MONTHS and more,......

- ...... even though we checked many TIMES AND by several people.

- Anyway, have a look and PLEASE KINDLY SHOW US YOUR COMMENT ON this site SO WE CAN MAKE it better.

Well, that is just the first paragraph ...... and I hope you dont get angry with me!

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